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January 2, 2011

“Life” by Keith Richards

There are many reasons why I would want to read “Life,” the new memoir by Keith Richards. I’ve been Rolling Stones fan since I was a kid back in Cincinnati and I first heard “Satisfaction” and “Last Time” on WSAI-AM, our local top-forty station. As a guitar player and songwriter, Keith is probably my number one musical inspiration. And of course the news reports and Stones press releases about his drug-fueled exploits have always been fascinating.

I actually made it through to the end of this 547-page tome. This is unusual because with the exception of the great Russian novelists, classics, and a few others, I have no patience to wade through 547 pages of anything. Most often I get a novel and read the first fifty pages to get a feeling for how the author writes, and then I’m bored. So the first thing I can say about “Life” is that it is surprisingly well written. It’s hard to say how much of this is attributable to James Fox, who does not receive credit on the cover, only on the title page. My guess is that the writing is Keith’s. He deftly moves back and forth in time, throws in asides, adds colorful commentary, and glides through his story with a combination of detail and big strokes that reflects how he approaches his music.

The guitar and songwriting info is useful for any musician. The drug advice and escapades become tedious, and I have to admit that after 1980 or so I started to scan paragraphs and skip the redundant drug discussions.

But for me the most interesting theme of “Life” is that it is about a creative and business partnership: Keith and Mick Jagger, the Glimmer Twins. This is the theme that anyone can relate to. Most everyone has a job with co-workers, or is married, or is involved in some type of long-term partnership. Keith and Mick (and of course Charlie) have hung together for nearly fifty years, which is an extraordinary record. According to Keith, the relationship between himself and Mick was solid until the beginning of the 1980s, when Mick became “unbearable.” Memoirs tend to be self-serving, and from “Life” one should not expect anything different, but I had hoped for more insight from Keith. For their estrangement he basically lays the blame on Mick, whom he accuses of Lead Vocalist Syndrome (LVS) and of wanting to jump on every passing musical trend, such as disco. Mick is shallow; Mick is endlessly calculating.

Keith could have seen Mick’s side. As the 1980s approached the Stones were a multimillion-dollar global enterprise and Mick was at his performing peak. Yet Mick’s songwriting and musical partner was mired in drug addiction and endless bouts with the law. It is reasonable to think that Mick would not know from one day to the next whether wild & crazy Keef would get busted and be incarcerated, or simply drop dead. And for years Keith had had trouble getting visas for tours. Would it not be unreasonable for Mick to hedge his bets and develop his solo career, even if it seemed to be nothing more than a reproduction Stones? Keith bitterly accuses Mick of disloyalty, but an argument could be made that Mick was as loyal as any human could be expected to be.

Mick is not the only one who can be calculating. I was interested to see that in the endless revelations of nearly every aspect of Keith’s private life, he did not discuss his famous teeth. There are photos from the seventies showing Keith and his rotten teeth, and then suddenly he’s got brand-new, white, shiny choppers. I guess that being a heroin addict is cool; wearing dentures at the age of forty is not so cool.

As for music, there was a time in the early 1960s when the Stones were at the very cutting edge of pop music. They bridged black and white musical universes. They pushed the envelope and blazed new trails, both culturally and musically. With the advent of the hated disco musical form in the mid-1970s (which also helped launch punk rock), the Stones began to lose their spot on at the edge. They slowly became traditionalists. To Keith this was fine. Mick saw it differently. He wanted the Stones to remain identified with the avant-garde. Mick was responsible for “Miss You,” the disco-influenced song from “Some Girls” that was a huge hit and helped maintain the Stones’ position as cultural nomads. The restless Mick is always shopping around for new sounds and new styles. To Keith this is evidence of a shallow artistic ethic, but perhaps it’s a continuation of what the Stones were always about.

“Life” is a fascinating glimpse into the life of a man who has against all odds remained a towering musical talent. Luckily, most readers won’t be able to directly relate to the chaotic lifestyle and drug culture (sometimes it seems as though Keef and his entourage are living on Mars), but his journey both as a creative individual and as a collaborator with his partners speaks to us all.

"Life" by Keith Richards

December 7, 2010

“Strategic Default” by A.A. Diji

Congratulations to my client Augustine Diji on the release of his book “STRATEGIC DEFAULT: How to Create a Brighter Financial Future For You, Your Family, or Your Business,” which I had the pleasure of editing. If you thought that strategic default was an option reserved exclusively for banks and big corporations, think again–with homeowners across America underwater or in mortgage default, it is becoming an increasingly acceptable alternative. The book is now available on Amazon.com.

"Strategic Default" by A.A. Diji

- Looking for a book editor? From our offices in Gloucester, MA, USA, which is an hour north of Boston, editor Thomas Hauck provides professional book editing, ghostwriting, and proofreading services for authors in the Boston area, New England, the United States, and worldwide. For unsurpassed personal editing services, contact Thomas Hauck today.

 

 

October 7, 2010

“The Millionaire Fastlane” by MJ DeMarco

Congratulations to my client MJ DeMarco on the release of his new book “The Millionaire Fastlane: Crack the Code to Wealth and Live Rich for a Lifetime,” now available on Amazon.com. Editing the book was a great experience and MJ tells the inspiring story of how he made his first millions and how you can, too.

MJ says that the traditional route to wealth is this: “Graduate from college, get a good job, save 10% of your paycheck, buy a used car, cancel the movie channels, quit drinking expensive Starbucks mocha lattes, save and penny-pinch your life away, trust your life savings to the stock market, and one day, when you are oh, say, 65 years old, you can retire rich.” This method (the “slow lane”) is much too tedious and unpredictable; he shows you how to stop dreaming about pie-in-the-sky-bye-and-bye (as Reverend Ike used to say) and have your pie today.

The Millionaire Fastlane

- Professional Book Editing: From our offices in Gloucester, MA, USA, which is an hour north of Boston, editor Thomas Hauck provides professional book editing, ghostwriting, and proofreading services for authors in the Boston area, New England, the United States, and worldwide. For unmatched personal service and a free quote, contact Thomas Hauck book editor today,

October 2, 2010

“The Ghost Writer”

I found “The Ghost Writer” by Robert Harris in the mass-market paperback book rack at Shaw’s supermarket in Gloucester. My overall report is that it’s a good, brisk read that gets the job done. I actually finished the book, cover to cover. I mention this because most of the thrillers that I pick up bore me after the first few chapters; they are crammed full of useless detail, or they are pretentious, or they start out with an action scene and the poor writer must struggle to keep up the absurdly high level of testosterone as the pages slog past. Robert Harris starts small and gradually expands his universe so that we learn something new at a regular rate. He keeps the story on a short leash, and it’s narrated in an easy conversational style with more than a few winks to the reader to let you know that the goal here is entertainment, not Masterpiece Theatre. It’s a healthy approach.

It’s also a good example of the craft of storytelling. In the book’s opening line the MacGuffin is expertly delivered: “The moment I heard how McAra died, I should have walked away.” This one sentence tells us a lot: there is a murder mystery; the narrator is, or becomes, involved in same; and the narrator lives to tell the tale. (As it turns out, we never learn precisely how McAra died, which is slightly irritating.) The principle setting is a rambling house on Martha’s Vineyard in January, and like any good cozy mystery the skies are gloomy, the rain is unrelenting, and the big gray waves crash upon the shore. Inside the house, the servants keep the fireplace roaring and various characters inhabit the many second-floor bedrooms. All the while, the reluctant hero learns more about Adam Lang, Lang’s tough but sexy wife Ruth, and Lang’s presumed mistress Amelia Bly. (We never get much explicit information about this mistress business; it is understood to be true by everyone, but we never catch them in the act and in the end it’s not relevant to the plot.)

The narrator is no James Bond. He doesn’t even have a name, at least not one that is revealed to the reader. Really—we never know his name. He’s just “the ghost.” Harris accomplished this neat trick by having Adam Lang address him by the sobriquet “man,” on the grounds that Lang forgets everyone’s name.

As the pages fly by, the mystery deepens to include the CIA and all sorts off international skullduggery involving shadowy university professors. There’s an evil company that evokes Halliburton and the suggestion that the British Prime Minister, Adam Lang / Tony Blair, was an American puppet. As the ghostwriter digs up more dirt, the tensions come to a boil—and then suddenly the story is slammed shut by a violent episode at the Martha’s Vineyard airport. It’s a little too convenient and frankly I wish that the author had had the fortitude to force his characters to end the story themselves rather than relying on a random device to wrap things up. Setting up character conflicts is difficult work, especially in high-stakes thrillers, and the reader looks forward to the characters resolving the plot themselves. It’s less satisfying when the gods on Mt. Olympus provide the denouement.

Despite this minor quibble, “The Ghost Writer” is a darned good yarn, combining elements of a cozy mystery with a political thriller. The tale is briskly told with a minimum of fuss, and Harris spices his prose with just enough literary inventiveness to make reading it fun.

September 20, 2010

“VmusicBook”

Recently released on Amazon.com is the “VmusicBook,” which I had the privilege to edit earlier this summer for an Elance client.

“VmusicBook” has been specifically created for urban musical talent and aspiring entrepreneurs. The music industry today is very different from what it was five or ten years ago. Thanks to the emergence of the Internet and other technical advances, not only have business models changed but ways of recording music, distributing music, and marketing music have evolved. We are now experiencing a digital music revolution, which has opened the doors for almost everyone with a dream to succeed in the music industry.

“VmusicBook” demonstrates how to protect your intellectual property and retain 100% copyright ownership of your musical works, ensuring that you will earn full value for your creative products. You’ll learn how to use your skills, abilities, knowledge, and understanding, and even other people’s resources, to establish a viable music-based business.

Whether you’re a singer, a songwriter, a rapper, a Grime MC, a musician, a music/beat producer, a manager, a promoter, or a marketer, “VmusicBook” will guide you through the entrepreneurial process for setting up your own business venture. The book also includes a comprehensive list of industry contacts revealing the contact names, addresses, phone numbers, fax numbers, emails, and websites of music industry professionals.

VmusicBook

- From our offices in Gloucester, MA, an hour north of Boston, editor Thomas Hauck provides professional proofreading, ghostwriting, and book editing services for authors in the Boston area, New England, the United States, and worldwide. For unmatched personal service, contact Thomas Hauck book editor today.

July 21, 2010

“Lucas Manson” Review by Brizmus

Another book blog review of “Lucas Manson” was posted online today. It’s at Brizmus  Blogs Books.

Here is an excerpt:

“Lucas Manson is a solid, extraordinarily creative story. It’s engaging and refreshing in a totally unexpected way. It’s a totally fresh and unique take on the idea of vampires and vampirism (though really, vampire is the wrong word here), and I was thrilled to finally have a book that doesn’t look on vampires in a completely positive light. I loved his explanation for what “vampires” are and how they came to be. The idea of two different “homo” species diverging in such a way, creating homo sapiens and homo cruentus, who are addicted to blood, came across as absolutely brilliant to me.”

–Brizmus

July 16, 2010

“Lord of the Flies”

This post really isn’t about the classic 1954 novel by William Golding. A dog-eared copy sits on my bookshelf, its slender (208-page) profile overshadowed by bulkier modern thrillers, and some day I will get around to writing a blog about it.

I’m writing because I happened to see in the “Los Angeles Times” a book review of a new Golding biography by John Carey. It turns out that “Lord of the Flies” was not always recognized as a milestone of literature; it very nearly never got published. To paraphrase the article by Nicholas Delbanco:

William Golding’s first three novels went unpublished – and “Lord of the Flies” was nearly a miss until the editor at Faber and Faber, Charles Monteith, rescued the manuscript of “Flies” from the refuse pile. Monteith reversed the decision of a professional reader (hired by Faber and Faber) who pronounced this verdict: “Time: the Future. Absurd & uninteresting fantasy about the explosion of an atom bomb on the Colonies. A group of children who land in jungle-country near New Guinea. Rubbish & dull. Pointless.”

It is an  inspiration to every aspiring writer or musician or actor. Never give up  – you never know when lightning may strike.

http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/news/la-ca-william-golding-20100711,0,4155311.story

July 4, 2010

A Brief Comment About Book Criticism

Having spent most of my adult life in the entertainment business (first in rock music, then in book writing), I’ve experienced both positive and negative reviews of my work. These experiences have allowed me to draw some conclusions about how to respond to criticism and how a critic can offer an opinion that is useful rather than merely attention-getting.

A case in point is a recent review of my novel “Lucas Manson,” posted by Daniel Nighting on the book review blog “Reading for Sanity.” As reviews go, it was pretty rough. Scathing, in fact. Mr. Nighting had plenty of negative things to say about my book, and nothing positive.

But unless a negative review discourages people from buying the book, it’s not necessarily a bad thing. The fact is that an artist can often learn more from a negative review than a positive review. A reviewer who writes, “This book is great!” or “I was captivated from beginning to end!” is offering praise but is not offering useful information to the author as to how he or she can be a better communicator. But the reviewer who says, “The plot was too simplistic” or “The lead character was thinly drawn” is offering useful information that an author can consider for the next project.

Mr. Nighting, aside from expressing his general disdain for “Lucas Manson,” made a few specific comments. In particular, he disliked the amount of detail: the Bakelite elevator button, and the descriptions of what the characters ate at various meals. Fair enough; these are choices that I made and if he doesn’t like them then I’ll think about how I can write more effectively in the future. Whenever an author includes a small detail, you never know whether it’s too much or whether, as you hope, it allows the reader to become part of the scene. We all try to avoid needless or empty detail; somehow every bit of information that you give to the reader has to have meaning or relevance to the story. For example, in Homer’s “Odyssey,” there is no little time devoted to describing the meals: the selecting of the lamb or cow, the slaughtering, the cooking of the meat (always wrapped in fat), and of course the oft-repeated mixing of the wine. Could the story survive without these descriptions? Probably. Would it be as much fun to read? No.

Negative comments can be useful. But it is up to the critic to be careful and responsible. In his review, Mr. Nighting states that Lucas Manson and the members of his “Evil Cult of Darkness” are “vampires,” and “pathetic” ones at that. This is where his comments become useless and silly. The definition of a “vampire,” and one that with some variations every conventional romantic vampire novel follows, is “the reanimated body of a dead person believed to come from the grave at night and suck the blood of persons asleep” (Merriam-Webster).  In my book I deliberately did not use this term to describe Lucas Manson. Manson and his followers are not vampires; they are perfectly ordinary hominids who go out in the sun and eat regular food. They cannot become bats and they cannot avoid mortal death. They don’t sparkle and they don’t have sharp teeth. What they have is an addiction to human blood, just like a junkie is addicted to heroin. And if each one doesn’t get his or her pint of blood every week, they undergo horrific withdrawal. As the leader of his people, Manson’s problem is simple: he has to feed his growing flock. It’s a business. It’s not romantic and it’s not always fun. Is Minister Manson a bit of a buffoon? You bet, just like most petty dictators are. He is wrapped up in creating his own mythology, and to ordinary folk he seems outsized, like a Macy’s parade float full of hot air. He’s more Mussolini than Dracula.

Mr. Nighting states that the “vampires” in “Lucas Manson” are “pathetic.” What does this mean? That they are not super-powerful? That they cannot sprout wings and fly? That they have ordinary human characteristics? What Mr. Nighting’s comment really means is that Mr. Nighting had a preconception about the book and about vampires. I can only surmise that he must have wanted the characters in “Lucas Manson” to be like the conventional vampires he has experienced in fiction and enjoys reading about. They are not, and therefore the characters did not fit his preconception of what a vampire ought to be. This reveals a rigidity of thinking and an unwillingness to approach a book with an open mind.

It would have been much more useful if Mr. Nighting had said, “I understand what the author was trying to do, and here is how he utterly failed.” Or even, “I cannot figure out what the author is trying to do!” Unfortunately, his comments reveal more about his own personality than offer validation of his activities as a book critic.

Should I, the author, address this problem? Perhaps I could put a big banner across the book’s cover that proclaims “Lucas Manson Is NOT a Vampire.” How about this one: “Lucas Manson: The Vampire Book Satire.” Or I could go in the other direction and edit the book to make Lucas Manson more vampire-y and romantic. But that would be no fun.

Perhaps the best way to do it is to keep plugging away and doing the best I can to be original and provocative and entertaining.

June 19, 2010

“An Amazing Life After 50″ by Karen Batchelor

I’m delighted to see another one of my book editing projects on Amazon.com. Karen Batchelor is a very talented and dedicated life coach who helps people move ahead with a positive attitude and to overcome life’s challenges. I had the pleasure to work with Karen and to edit her new book, “50 Ways to Have an Amazing Life After 50.” The book is packed with humor, life secrets, endearing stories and timeless advice, and much of the inspiration comes from Karen’s grandmother who lived to be almost 100.

Designed to be read anytime and anywhere, Karen says, “’50 Ways To Have An Amazing Life After 50′ is much like a box of chocolates where you can reach in, pick out what you want, enjoy it and come back for more later.” Even if you’re on the younger side of 50, pick up a copy for your  parents or even grandparents.

50 Ways to Have an Amazing Life After 50

- From our offices in Gloucester, MA, an hour north of Boston, editor Thomas Hauck provides professional proofreading, ghostwriting, and book editing services for authors in the Boston area, New England, the United States, and worldwide. For unmatched personal service, contact Thomas Hauck book editor today.

 

 

June 18, 2010

“Secrets of the Skim” by Hal Blackwell

One of my recent book editing projects has now been published and is available on Amazon: “Secrets of the Skim” by Hal Blackwell. A few months ago Hal contacted me and asked me to edit a book he was writing about his experiences at the Merrill Lynch office in Blueberg, South Carolina. Don’t think there’s much money in Blueberg? Think again. Hal handled many high-profile, retired corporate executives and sports figures who had eight-figure investment accounts. But in late September 2008, Hal saw the financial meltdown coming and he took bold action on behalf of his clients. Just before the market plunged in October, he urged his clients to get out of the stock market and move into cash and other liquid investments.

Do you think that his bosses at Merrill Lynch were pleased? They were not. To Hal’s shock and amazement his advice enraged Merrill Lynch management, who admonished him for jeopardizing the firm’s revenue: the relentless “skim” that produces a steady flow of cash from fees that are charged to every securities account regardless of trading activity. If his clients converted to cash, the fees would dry up. For acting in his clients’ best interests and helping many of them to save millions, Hal Blackwell was drummed out of Merrill Lynch.

Fortunately Hal landed on his feet and today he’s president of HE Blackwell Advisor, LLC, consulting on subjects like corporate debt structure, acquisition funding, distressed debt valuation, and capital utilization. He’s also a terrific writer.

The book reads like a financial services thriller. It tells a story that every American ought to hear. I’m grateful to have made a small contribution to what I know will be a very successful book.

Secrets of the Skim by Hal Blackwell

- From our offices in Gloucester, MA, an hour north of Boston, editor Thomas Hauck provides professional proofreading, ghostwriting, and book editing services for authors in the Boston area, New England, the United States, and worldwide. For unmatched personal service, contact Thomas Hauck book editor today.

 

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